Welcome back to Red Pen Tidbits! We took a dive into three steps for using pronouns and antecedents correctly. I hope you’ve been practicing!
This week, we’re focusing on commas with coordinating conjunctions. Don’t worry, I’ll try to make this as painless as possible! This post is also part of the Author Toolbox Blog Hop. Feel free to jump in with the link at the end of this post.
What exactly are we talking about here?
Even if you don’t remember what a coordinating conjunction is right away, I’m sure the acronym FANBOYS rings some far off bell. Right? Yes? Awesome!
These are the only coordinating conjunctions there will ever be. Unfortunately, they have a couple of uses and a few different comma rules. (Don’t worry, I’ll even let you break one or two of them!)
1. Connecting compound subjects, predicates, and objects!
Therefore, having a compound subject means you have more than one person doing the action. A compound predicate means you have more than one action in the sentence. A compound object means you have more than one person or object receiving the action.
The Rule: You combine the compound pieces with a coordinating conjunction. You don’t use a comma if there are only two. *Note: sometimes you need another piece to make the sentence make sense. This turns the coordinating conjunction into a correlative conjunction.*
– Jackie and Annie want to read the same book.
– Either all the extra books or the accumulation of scattered movies has got to go.
– Jackie reads a book and imagines the scenes.
– All of this is either going in the trash or getting donated.
– Jackie wants a book and a magazine.
– She’s one step away from junking either all the extra books or the accumulation of scattered movies.
2. Lists, lists, and more lists!
Lists! Wait… You’re not talking about bullet points?
A list can be found in pretty much any part of the sentence. Technically the compound pieces we looked at above are lists, but the examples I used only contained two things. This time we’ll look at what happens when you have three or more!
The Rule: You combine the list with a coordinating conjunction. You’ll use a comma (called an Oxford Comma) before the conjunction at the end of a list.
The controversy: There are many grammarians who believe you don’t need the Oxford Comma unless the meaning of the sentence would be unclear without it.
I will let you know right now that I am definitely #TeamOxfordComma, but you choose what works best for you.
– Jackie, Annie, and Sarah want to read the same book.
– All the men, women, children,and pets were invited to the wedding.
– Jackie reads a book, imagines the scenes,anddreams about castles.
– All of this is going in the trash, getting donated,or vanishing with magic right now!
– Jackie wants a book,a movie, and a magazine.
Wait! Can I ever break this rule? I did tell you about the Oxford Comma controversy, so you decide if that counts as breaking that rule! In addition, some writers will use ‘and’ in place of all the commas if the character is excited about something and unwilling to take a breath.
3. Combining two complete sentences!
Combining two complete sentences (better known as a compound sentence), allows you to join two similar thoughts in one. Notice the word similar! You don’t want to join two different sentences unless you’re contrasting something.
The Rule: You combine these two sentences with a coordinating conjunction. You’ll use a comma before the conjunction to form the compound sentence.
– Jackie read a book, and Sarah writes in her journal.
– We were invited to the wedding, but our pets were not allowed.
– Jackie put the book away, for she had already read it.
– She wanted to through all of his junk away, so she did!
Wait!! Can I ever break this rule? You didn’t hear this from me, but you can. Generally it’s broken in dialogue if your character is speaking quickly. Sometimes characters will even combine more than one complete sentence… EEK!
Take out your trusty Writer’s Notebook, and open to the next blank page. Try out a few sentences using coordinating conjunctions and their lovely commas!
Then, try using them in dialogue! Let me know how it goes in the comments below!
Coming up next…
I hope you’re ready for our next Red Pen Tidbit (August 2) about commonly confused words!
Share with me in the comments below about your most frustrating grammar/usage errors. I will gladly address them in the future!
If you need a bit more help after this tidbit, then please check out these other helpful sites.
- “The Coordinating Conjunction” via Grammar Bytes!
- “The Oxford Comma” via Ann Edwards
- “Compare and Contrast: various rules for comma usage in compound sentences” via Thomas Weaver
- “What is a comma splice, anyway? A quick look at commas, comma splices, and Oxford commas.” via A.H. Warren
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