I recently read Elizabeth Bishop’s “One Art” for about the thousandth time and thought that, this week, we might take a very concrete approach to something lost. We’ve all lost things from time to time, and by “lost things” I place the emphasis on “things.” This week let’s write about things that we’ve lost—actual objects, not loves, not feelings, not friendships, not people, not pets.
1. Begin by making a list of things that you’ve lost (a favorite book, a piece of jewelry, an old photograph that meant a lot to you, a family heirloom, a treasured memento of a special time).
2. Select one item from your list and begin making a new list of what that lost item meant to you. What were the conditions or circumstances that made it important to you?
3. How did you feel about losing the item?
4. Begin your poem with a statement about the object and then go on to explain how it was lost. From there, let the poem take you where it wants to go.
5. Another option you might consider is to write from the lost object’s point of view (adopt the lost object’s persona).
1. Think in terms of a narrative poem in which you tell the story of your lost item, but be sure not to over-tell. Remember that the best poems show, they don’t just tell.
2. Your obvious subject will be the lost item, but you should work toward another subject that goes beyond the simple act of losing something.
3. Use language that’s engaging and accessible.
4. Avoid clichés and sentimentality. Evoke emotion through images.
5. Try to create a “dismount” that doesn’t sum up your particular loss as much as it sums up the universal feeling of something lost.