I am not very good email writer, maybe you can help?

i want to write a compliant about unapproved access to my apartment at 2.30pm on friday the 30th of March including the following points

- feels like a massive invasion of privacy.
- completely mortified someone would let themselves in unannounced
- making an effort to bring this up this time as i know damn well it is not the first time. 
- raises some massive concerns about the security of the apartment.
- see video attached to this email as evidence of the unwarrented access.
  Of course, I'd be happy to help you write an email regarding the unapproved access to your apartment. Here's a draft email that you can use as a starting point:

Subject: Unauthorized Access to My Apartment - Complaint

Dear [Landlord's Name],

I am writing to bring to your attention a serious issue regarding unauthorized access to my apartment at [Apartment Address] on Friday, March 30th at 2:30 pm. I am extremely distressed and concerned about this violation of my privacy, and I hope you will take immediate action to address this issue.

Here are the key points I would like to highlight:

1. Feels like a massive invasion of privacy: The fact that someone entered my apartment without my permission or prior notice is a clear violation of my right to privacy. I believe it is essential to ensure that my living space is secure and safe, and I expect you to take necessary measures to prevent any unauthorized access.
2. Completely mortified someone would let themselves in unannounced: I am shocked and disappointed that someone would enter my apartment without my consent or prior notice. This behavior is unacceptable, and I expect you to take appropriate action to prevent it from happening again.
3. Making an effort to bring this
 Subject: Serious Complaint: Unapproved Access to My Apartment on Friday, March 30th at 2:30 PM

Dear [Recipient's Name],

I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to express my deep concern and file a formal complaint regarding an unapproved access to my apartment on Friday, March 30th at 2:30 PM. This incident has left me feeling extremely uncomfortable and concerned about my privacy and the security of my living space.

The unauthorized entry of an individual into my apartment feels like a massive invasion of my privacy. I am completely mortified that someone would let themselves in unannounced, without my knowledge or consent. This incident has caused me significant distress, and I am sure you will understand the gravity of my concerns.

I have chosen to bring this matter to your attention because I am convinced that this is not the first time such an incident has occurred. I have previously had similar concerns, but this time I am compelled to address the issue, given the clear evidence I have gathered.

Furthermore, this incident raises some massive concerns about the security measures in place for the apartment. I believe it is essential for the management to take this matter seriously and investigate the situation to prevent any future unauthorized access.

Attached to this email, you will find video evidence of the unwarranted access, which